Aaaaaaaaaah... *Sigh of Relief*

Lol, great piece man. The imagery intertwined with your emotion and originality so beautifully. It seemed like all your strongest fields of writing came together and cullminated into this masterpiece. All in all everything was pretty flawless, which really makes it tough to break something down when tipically I like to give constructive critisism. Ya, sorry I cant say more but I can't find anything I dont like about it man. Lol except that color actually... That shit hurt my eyes man.