You know... I was making comments before on another poem of yours complaining about how you vent to much, but, with this piece I think it was done perfectly. Here, you found a healthy balance of venting and letting out your emotions, with lines that engage the reader by speaking from more of a narrative stand point. The imagery was on point aswell, nice and creative lines that never really sounded familliar to me at any point. Uuuum, only thing I could suggest is to work on your structuring. Just neate everything up a bit so that alittle more astetically pleasing you know? But great piece, I really enjoyed the read... Stay up man.