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I wasn't feeling the emotion too much, the vocb was good and the imagery alike, but i like to read peices that show well thought and plotted writting skills, although this had some good aspects to it, such as the structure and the wording i would have liked to see more creative skills used, to me this wasn't bad, but it wasn't as good as maybe it could have been, but well done.
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