Wow, you know... I LOVED this piece. It was so short and to the point which really didn't give it time to ever lose the emotion or authenticity of the feel. The birth/death date and picture also just made this super heart felt because now we have a face and facts which pull in the reader and make this soooooo engadging. It's a piece you really can't NOT feel, it's just... The Heart. I mean, with all of that ^, you even had a really nice flow and structure to the piece. What I really liked about that is how it felt like you were just talking, not rhyming cuz you have to, not meticulously placing in internal flow patterns, but just talking with the up most fluency. Great job overall man... Sorry for the loss aswell.

Return the favor on my OM: "When The Artist Cries"
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224727