Your rhyming wasnt exact but still was a multi which gave this piece a unique flow. the short lines worked well with the flow also, was VERY poetical and had imagery and good vocab

The heart broken brush cried
a scared spectrum's dyeing shards
of love as I wiped his marred eyes
against a stretch of page to create fine art.

^they were the best imo but overall a solid piece mate. Good work.

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