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Old 03-29-06, 09:06 PM   #10
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Check,
"SIPCS WITH ATTITUDE" - sorry dude, I don't get beat by herbs
And flash you seem to need a lucky spell.. just for five-letter words
ehh....ok wordplay. not so good
Seriously, kid's a wack artist.. and look, this loss I can't afford
So for each line he drops, I'll slap flash - back to the drawing board
nice....good wordplay and nice punch/personal
Watch me smash this crook some more, easily put this match to bed
Cuz flash won't connect with a solid bar, until I bash one round his head
lol....good ish....like the twist on that second line
This wack clown bitch is dead.. and I'll hang his scrawny ass instead
Attach the rope to this battle, and really leave him hanging by a thread
ehh.....concept is played like you say further along
^ That concepts a bit old yeah, but flash is probably pulling out this fight
And I'd let this RV bitch-head start.. but his wackness is already out of sight
lmao....nice closer. i thought he'd no show


axe about me fam....cuz ill be quick ta cleave ya
cuz you cant grasp FB.....like a wack reciever....\
Axe about you? who would he axe down? and why?
keep tryin dude...i rearange the flesh.....
get you erased off the board like a etch and sketch...
only good bar in this verse and it could be worded better
I put bullets in ya chest.....punches....not guns...
i would talk bout ya life, but lookin at ya post count....
....it seems you dont have one...
ehhh.............................................. ...........
this site has to be down.....they made you a vet?
but you aint good....you juss take care of their pets...
good idea, but you worded it hella wrong
ill cut you so low...call me a barber...cuz you like ma fade..
and duke here gets NF...cuz he dont make the grade....
ehh, it's ok, nothin special, cheap attemp at nameplay


Nick came way better, seen better from him but he took it on creativity and more effective punches
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