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Old 03-30-06, 02:57 PM   #2
J Summers
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i been waiten on this...

i figured you bee better than this...

first verse is ok some lines are rushed emotion is prevelent but nothing special.. lyrics is good.. makes sense and coresponds with the beat... some more words it sounds you slipped up on...atleast you on beat thats a plus...not my typa track... i like somthing i can bang in ma car wit da bass way up...
second guy is pretty good... flow is ok lyrics ok... pretty much same as you

decent track 7/10
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