Listening through what I always listen through

The beat is nice, but sounds mad lo-fi. The instrumental intro went on pretty long, you should have been speaking this in this time.

Your vocals are too loud, especially in stereo. They come in too suddnely and phase out again like the insturment intro was, and to be real I didn't make out much what of you said in the first verse, and then boom the hook was up again. EQing man, EQing is badly needed. Turn your highs up and mids up, and your vol WAY down, like 4-5dB. even sounds like you clipepd slightly on the "let that goooooo" on the outro to the second verse.

The lyrics seemed on point, but personally I think you should have taken your excitement down a notch and still kept all the emotion in the lyrics by turning down your vol in the headphones a little which would have naturally brought your voice down to level it out, would have matched the emotional pace of the track a little better. And EQ!!

Yup. Peace

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