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Old 03-30-06, 07:06 PM   #6
Enygma
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Am I the only one who thought his flow was pretty good? Anywho, I liked this shit man. You maybe should have split the verse in two and threw a hook in there somewhere, then it would sound more like an actual song than just a mixtape track

Also, your boy gets a little monotone. Tell him he needs to switch up his voice every once in a while to keep people intrested. He also fell off the beat a little in the beginning....
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