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Old 03-31-06, 03:40 AM   #9
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Serbnes had a better flow and punches...........against tay he fuckin squashed him with hella personals...............against ANarchy..MEh was a lil wak...


against tay

I crack heads and crush spines so watch it taytay
i'll brokeback you without makin the battle look gay
Yeah breathe stink so ill plug the nose when we meet
CUZ TayTay dont rock grillz..
.. nah cracker, YOU just got bad teeth.
Kid got at me to ghost cuz the bitch knows I'm dope
So when he asked for a hard punch, I just sent him off with a broken nose
you needin 2 ambulances, kid. as you divide
they sendin one for your battered body & one for ya wounded pride

^^everything was just str8 ill and hit hard...


against anarchy


Ya Dame's Fat dude, she sent pics n said "dont laugh at me"
BUT comon man, the only thing attracted to her is gravity.
Got Beef? Looking 4 beef? well the search is over.. shit
I'll put my Gun in your alcohol and force you shoots from it

^^^ was the best part...he finished strong man....

9/10

TAY........

U never get votes..u think it has to do with hate
And you being gay explains
WHy your bars are never straight

^ my fav. line but thats about it...everything else against SERB was weak...


Anarchy
Fuck this fag noob im about to let the merking begin
This dude could by a F-150 and still not AFord this win
Now your just a fucking geek..you cant test my endurance
only time this bitch is proggresive..is when hes buying insurance
^^ this good.........nice man liked how you put ur punches together in this one..

TAY's RATE 7/10


ANARCHY
Your punches barely hit, while mine are damage inflictin,
So I would bring shame to Serb… but he’s already an online victim,
I feel sorry for you dude, thinking you could actually go far,
Cuz we don’t need graphics tools, to know how dumb you are…
^^nice aginst SERB......nice nie man nice..........................

TT

You never come fresh dude, we’re sick of you droppin that blank stuff,
So am gettin rid of TT, like I made Audi go bankrupt…
Your wack as fuck son, your lines are nothin more than borin,
On the real you needa pick up ya shit… then drop it on anotha forum,
Fuckin homo, don’t run to S when your lines need a mending,
Cuz you needa clean up your style, nd Serbs are only good for ethnic cleansing…

^^verse was good nice wordplay and personals......
ANs. RATE 8.5


so SERB takes my vote for an overall better verse agianst both of you!!!

V/SERB!
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