ok..typing as I listen...ok...opened decent but coulda opened with something more engaging....u didn't real draw me in with how u started...oh that was the hook? aww man u really need to up emotion an make it wetter...to give a real draw...its hurting ya...first verse...yea...ya delivery is borderline monotone...I can tell u still learning on how to really maximize ya voice...if u had fluctuated more woulda been lot stronger...k enyg...I def feel u on the slow flow way more son...it really brings ya voice out IMO...I like how u dragging out ya words....flow was tight jus needed a various...if u has mixed in a few bars of engyma spit spitting here & there more of a rhythmically up & down flow AH MAN that woulda tore this shit DOWN!!! but as is its still a good, enjoyable flow....keep dropping them joints son........1

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