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Voted For: David Lama
KempoMRK: Hate to say it but your verse was terrible. Practically no punch-lines and some of ya shit didn't even rhyme. No multies, no nothin. You definately don't belong in elevated front lines. Take it down a level and "elevate" some more then come back to "elevated".
David Lama : Again not such a great verse. I wouldn't consider it elevated but it was much better than Kempo's. You had a punch line or two but they weren't that great, try some multi's. But yea, you easily took this one.
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