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Old 04-01-06, 07:32 PM   #2
Terumoto
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This was dope. Fuckin dope.

Such condensed language.. It was completely packed with emotion and meaning. The theme was ill... Im pretty sure I picked up what the poem was about and all that but I could be wrong.

The last two stanzas were really nicely worded.

The bats fold
Their ears in.
And here sings
the ignorant ode
to reversed thinking.


That bit was ill.
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