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Old 04-01-06, 10:26 PM   #9
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It feels like we're abandoned
and it should never even of happened in the first place
but i'l wish away my dismay and wish you a happy birthday
good way to start it..
loved from manchester to your birthplace, never forgoten
aniversary's approaching,our hearts return..still broken
even as this is spoken,
feeling this..
its not enough. but its a small token of all our love
we look up to you, as you look down on us from above
dont make me start crying..
and although, be here; you should, a life to have stayed
but destinys decision was made and it'l never be changed
feeling the emotion in this bar, man
its true we all prayed, but you should never have died
insides burn for your return just to say our goodbyes
nice..
we have to learn it wont happen so this rhythm's a doubt
but I know WHEREVER you are, you will be listening now
good closer, RIP

I agree what with Atticus said about it being short and to the point.. Some major emotion in this too, I remember you posting when this happened.. RIP.. good piece, man. *Hugs*
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