This beat gets used once every few months man lol...

Aiight, straight up... Ya style needs work bruz... What you might wanna try doin (somethin I gotta try doing more myself too) is adding more melody to ya delivery..

Instead of jus doin straight up lyrics, you gotta switch ya flow more often.. Cause at the moment its at too much of a constant and it can sound droney and robotic... Thats to do with your vocals aswell, you dont really sound comfortable on the mic.. I seen mad shitloads of dudes have that same problem, its jus to do with experience and how long you been workin on getting your vocals to the point where they resonate with the track well music wise...

I've had some of the same problems your having I can tell.. And to an extent I still am, just on a smaller scale cause I been workin real heavily on my shit latly..

Keep at it mate..... Peace.

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RIP jono, peace out bboy.
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