not bad, sometimes your lines end sounding a little awkward/un-comfortable but thats not every line just a couple lines in a few song, other times ur flow sounds slihtly awkward aswell but again only from time to time, yeah i agree that your presence is lacking also i feel your deliveryis lacking animation/variation so your delivery does become abit boring at times, ;yrically its good, some nice multies n rhyme schemes goin on so no majour qualms there, some of ur beats are weak though, but thats a difference in taste thing.. yeh it aint bad, but u are lacking in ur delivery n presence, not bad at all tbh, but at the same time it aint amasing, good luck on the next one.
P.S.. i know your prolly gonna bitch and moan about this crit, im just being real, just cos i dont ride ur jock like most people dont mean im hating, just take what i say and use it to make the next one even better
