aight......
beat: lol.... reminds me of what would happen if Nintendo and Lil Jon made babies.
first verse: aight.... lil choppy in places... but you got this basics... just gotta polish your delivery... cuz the verse got all the fixings for a banger... yea... id most deff re-spit this... get the delivery right doggs... take your time wit it... cuz this got potential...
hook: i like this hook for real... but you gotta respit it... cuz you got some pauses... and shit.. that work... but not the way you workin em... you feel me???
2nd: yea..... smooth verse... you juss gotta respit for finess...
potential= 8.5/10
as is= 6.4/10
RTF