ehh wtf @ this beat? lool not bad, not my style tho lol

aiight on this. I can tell you improvin' a lot. Still got a lot of places needing elevating, but everyone needs this. and as long as you going in forward direction it's a plus. so good job on that man. Delivery needs imrpovement, really wasn't seeing it as you meant what you said. so redo shit def, put more umph into it, nah mean?

hook was pretty coo tho. not bad. should redo tho if you got time to make it the best, ya feel me?

overall, man, from where you are good steps forward. 7.5/10 stay up man. and RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225575

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