Thread: Coming Clean
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Old 04-02-06, 03:30 PM   #5
∆ P E X X
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listening..beat's coming in nice so far. beat's actually pretty IIILLLLLLLLLLLLL son.

Your vocals should go down a sliightt bit in the reverb. EQing your highs open would be real nice. The rhymes were nice lyrically, your timing was slightly off in some of the lines but that's just me being observant and noticing it. like you started a second to a second and a half too soon on the first line. Honestly man, I think the stuff that was off in this is things you'll solidify by virtue of continually spitting over time to be honest. Nothing you should be leaping out to fix immediately because they're small.


BUT STILL FIX EM!! lol

btw, who did this beat?
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