beat is pretty cool. a little RJD2-y


You could use some EQing skills. The lyrics are on and haha your story of shelter vs exposure is pretty funny. Nice walk down memory lane.

second verse, if that's you, it sounds liek your voice is warmed up now because it's pretty open, but you stuff that extra sylable in there that makes some lines seem rushed though they're actually just too long to stay on flow. A hook would have been ILL to seperate these two verses. The lyrics are pretty on point. word to the PM dawn and R.A.M. refferences.

pretty ill overall, some quality issues and the extra sylable gettin in once in a blue but a real good track overall. pretty much anyone can connect to this.

no rtf, I just felt like leaving feedback

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