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Old 04-02-06, 07:32 PM   #11
~Babylon~
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Voted For: shoosh

Your rhymes make me think, from when your shit is leagues beneath me....
I should shit myself...and use the PC screen as TP
^^^i have no idea what that means?
Answer: Skill Question: What’s this ass wipe’s verse lacking of?
Only time you beat and draw blood’s when you’re jacking off
^^^^this was just to damn forced!
I couldn’t reiterate your wackness with a stutter
You beating me’s like tryna feed Fat Bastard bread n butter
^^^^isnt feeding fat dueds bread and butter easy?
In closing, I’m proposing you refrain from getting cut down
The only time niggas can’t see you is when you Shut Down
^^^^that was...ummm?...i dont even know but it wasnt good!

overall....2/10....and structer was barely ok!
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Your faker than silicone tits, your getting death threats,
your see thru like cataracts like cadillacs your getting stretched,
^^^^very herbish but at least its a punch...well barely!
i'll make you wanna take your last breath,
i blast techs and glocks till your heart stops so think again,
^^^^^^what the hell was that!
about approaching me,i will open you up like having surgery,
fuck you for your anti purgery on the stand at my court case,
^^^OK this was a fill in...lol...jus a bunch of bull that means nothing!
yo fuck you B fuck your a bitch catching clips you making enemies,
your in the wrong place man about face and run away,
and pray to god that my gun dont spray,
^^^^what the hell is wit all the gangster...your on the net?
i've got a tombstone ready for your fucking name,
my crews known to use chrome and i dont mean paint,
^^^another herbish bar!
i'll smash you till your mangled and hang you till you dangle,
by your ankles and make you kiss my waist,
^^^^....lol.....more useless multi's
it's a waste of time tryna find your place in the rap game,
so give it up its enough its your fate,
^^^^^^^^WHAT!
to be a punk mother fucker without heart or brains,
and this victory's mine like your cash and dame,
^^^^^booooo...what a waist of words
the passion came to smash ya frame when you were saying,
i havent battled for a year man get off that train,
im quick to cause you pain now leave this battle at 1 and 1
cause you've been slain
^^^^wack closer you need to elevate alot....


overall.......2.1/10.......well at least you had something that sounded like a punch even though they were all wack....oh and your structer sucked.......



vote:shoosh
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