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Old 04-02-06, 09:05 PM   #4
Ysdat
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beats ok. you kick ya lyrics off nice, flows good, lyrics are simple. last bar of first verse was rushed to get out.

hooks a bit droosy, should of come through more amped/hyped on the hook.

second verse is same as first, same flow, same lyrics. emotion is a bit meh, this track is easy to loose interest based on not much hype and shit.

overall,personally i think you should of hyped it up alot more, gon ewith some adlibs and shit.

RTF on 'million eyes" dedication to god
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