First Dude - Your flow on this sounds a little too mechanical. I think it might be your quality though, cause I can hear the influxes in your voice, but it still sounds monotone. You should play around with the Graphics Equalizer while your vocals are playing so you can hear the shit change your voice and shit.

Jay 286 - Yor shit wasn't bad. It had a few monotone spots, but overall it was pretty good. Flow was alright. Not bad man ™

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