Ya mom massages my nuts
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Nice piece fam, I don't usually critique poems but anyways I was feeling its overall message..the depth of the meaning was tight...good strong emotion..u painted ya emotions in a metaphorical way that was tight...keep getting ya Langston Hughes on nigga........1
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice
Because at the end of the day, you get what you give
So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is
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