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Old 04-04-06, 10:26 AM   #1
Payn
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Voted For: John.Hendricks

Rex- ur drop i$ weak bro, nothing really $tood out, u tried 2 force tha word play at tha end, which came off weak bro. ur entire drop doesn't really make much sense.


Danjure- ur verse i$ good, probably wut won it 4 u, I didn't like the way you added all them dot$ & $hit... try 2 $horten ya line$ $o it make u feel like ya readin a book

Best bars

Drink a beer to this, cypherists get defective wrists
you can't "spit-rap", so my only compatition must be lisps

VS

I feel the vibration of you shivering as this chapter arrives
you hold so much unimportance....
............................................your names not even capitalized
Stop acting surprised, ya not dope, you the wackest with rhymes
I'll start "telling jokes while killing you" ..

rtf in thi$ battle here
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=224402
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