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Old 04-04-06, 06:18 PM   #2
Triple_N
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k typing as I listen....k..got a pac clip in intro koo, opened decent...I'm hearing u stumble on a few words...pronounciation hurting u a bit here...however aside from that ya flow has improved since I last heard ya...second half of verse delivery was pretty good def improved there....hook was decent...coulda been mixed stronger...ok another pac clip for outro it was good lil track..I was feeling lil story u told..I like the observer approach u took...good drop fam.......1
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