beat was mixed weak...low end is very overpowering...if they fixed that it'd been way better....flow is tight though....u def comign into ya own fam.....hook...was pretty good jus kinda under mixed...u coulda really brought it out more....story if progressing nicely..delivery is good too like that slight whisper type delivery...fits the beat....good energy...u improved alot man...even tho aint really into beat like that I'm still bobbing...cuz ya energy is on point...lyrically u came good, flow good, delivery good..solid drop...if that beat was mixed better this song would be a homerun...good story fam...good listen...def keep dropping fam.........1

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