i love the beat it really gives it a nice lil kicck
sets the flavor definetly feelin the flow
presence is aiight, kinda shaky
it can be fixed with alot of practice or memorizing the song
but as i read up there you did it in like one take
so definetly not bad
the mic sounds a little too dynamic though, maybe you should invest in a denser lds mic
my perosnal opinion is it would definetly add to your presence n voice quality
oh well just advice
holla