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beat sounds scary
Cho...the "arrgg,,uuuuhhh,,,ooohhh" at the beginning sounded strange...I liked how you came in the beat though...was slick and kinda sent shivers down me spine
The flow didn't match with that delivery though...Ur vocals need the highs raised...It sounds like you're rapping too close to the mic...
I like your rhyme scheme
beat could be amped a tad as well
Enygma's vocals had a crisper sound...I don't think this beat fit your flow though...Your flow wasn't bad on it, but it seemed disjointed
I like your rhyming as well, slick...
some good lines here and there from both
Decent track...But, both of you could come better than this...I fault the beat.
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