ok this track is decent, but the snare in the background ain't really doin it for me to be honest. the drumbeat sounds artificial to me, in the sense that in the main part of the tune the beat is an impossible beat to play (ie simultaneous snare x2, hihat and ride).

i think if the drum beat wasn't so scatty that this this would be good. and also if you added more double bass being played arco, that would fit in with the tune, giving it a natural "bassline."