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Old 04-05-06, 09:09 PM   #24
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Voted For: rexless

Premanition:
Elevated Frontlines? Kids Tryna Run Before He Walks
Rex The Kinda Guy You Know Is Dumb Before He Talks

^^^ First line was iight but tha second line was weak.

Structure Stretched Out Like The Metatarsals on Shaq
Remove those Intercostals Leave You 'Flat' On Ya 'Back'

^^^ Again first line was nice but second line doesn't make sense. Intercostals means between tha ribs.

Rex'Less' Than Wack, Infact His Track Record Is Cracked
Catering Beverages For Events & Still No Punch Is Packed

^^^ Nice little punch.

Style Not Tight Like Bow Knots, Your Dick In Donuts
‘Livin In The Shadows’ Like Small Breasts In Whole Cups

^^^ LOL. Good punch.

Hold Up! You In The Shadows? Hey Sorry Man I’ll Move
These Spits Got You Suckin Chips…
....Like Eatin Junk Food Through Tubes

^^^ Not feelin tha last one.

Rexless:
i'll Blow prem brains throu his mouth' so he can literally 'speak his mind
you still wouldnt win this battle if you tweaked ya verse and deleted mine

^^^Nice Nice opener.

Its like Ur Torso Hungry so ill send bullets till ya Chest Is Full
U couldn't Hang wit me if I was a 'Dick' and u were a 'Pair of Testicles

^^^Another good one.

I speak the truth. One bugged thug making ur net life hellish
Leave ur ass in floods of blood that’ll make New Orleans jealous

^^^Keep em comin.

Even less talent than "JC REAL" you'd have to go to the sun to be hot, G
But your a perfect role model by showing just how an MC should not be

^^^ Wasn't feelin tha first line, kinda played out. But i like the second.

I'll do you like policemen with nothing to do...prem is just a 'dead-beat'
The only time that he Exceles is when he's writing Spreadsheets

^^^LOL. Prolly my favorite bar outta ya verse.

My raps is in demand cuz I'm the man thats what you gotta understand
cause prem punches are like 'Micheal Jacksons Crib' they'll Never-Land

^^^ Another good punch.

nigga I stock raps, so diss me, & you'll receive what you ask for
i'll put prem throu so many 'Mental States', his 'brain'll' need a new Passport

^^^Good closer.
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