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Old 04-05-06, 09:40 PM   #15
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EyeDentdy: You had a decent verse, nothin special tho. You had some good punches. Try addin some multi's and uppin tha vocab. I really wasn't feelin tha closer, good concept but not well written.

MC:Philosopher: You had decent verse two. You punches were a little better than eyedentdy but you had some senseless shit in ya verse like tellin him that he would never be "noble gas", like he wants to be noble gas or somehtin. LOL. I thought it was close, but for me his closer lost it for him.

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