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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP:
Mhmm.. I know this beat.. Just cant put my finger on who dropped on it first...
First verse: Flow needs to be a bit more consistant.. Beat drowns out ya vocals at some points, did you do dynamics processing? Maybe try to amp it up with a hard limiter tool bro... Same as I'm about to tell Ysdat bro, try and smooth out ya vocals a bit.. You sound almost like ya trying to hard...
Second verse: Better than I heard you drop on ya last shit.. I think you've outgrown ya mic man.. You should look at trynna get a shure58 or something that will allow you to open up your vocal range a bit more... You should look at the way your delivering your verse when you rap, try to cool it down a bit and give your voice a more smooth and less angry sound to it...
Third verse ????... I recon there should of been one... and a hook to lead out on.. Kinda finished a bit weird...
But its cool...
Wasnt a bad track.. Jus could do with a bit of improvement on the production and delivery.
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