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Old 04-06-06, 11:20 AM   #25
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Voted For: FIVESTAR GENERAL

on the realest level imaginable i think JC completely flopped in this battle. the packing heat line was played and a half, and that gay hotline ish was just unecessary...how old are you fam? the flow was ok though, although the content and wordplay was poor at best and the punches were ineffective.

now 5star i thought you were seriously lackin in punches and your flow was inconsistent in some parts. but you seemed to actually be trying to include punches sometimes. to be honest, you'd be better off having typed a shorter, harder verse, and put in all your better lines in there instead. you had the only average line in this battle

Uza pussy fam, only time u see da hood is wen look at ya moms mini-van/
Im from tha slums, nigga to me bridgewater like disneyland/

even though the most obvious thing that could have been changed is that the two lines should have been swopped to give it a 1-2 punch structure.

but yeh you came with the better verse, eventually

so v/5star