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Old 04-06-06, 12:52 PM   #13
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Voted For: Jiamine

Jaimine - Opener was weak. Second bar was a decent punch. Third bar was iight but the whole retard thing is kinda played. The fourth bar was a weak punch. LOL. Fifth bar was horrible. Closer was weak. Strengthin ya punches and add some multis.

D.P. - Wasn't feelin tha opener. Second bar was weak too. The punch in tha third bar was iight but the first line was weak. Fourth bar was another not so good one. Closer wasn't hot either. You didn't really have any punches that hit at all. Keep elevatin.
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