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Old 04-06-06, 01:02 PM   #8
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Voted For: Jiamine

EyeDentdy - Nice opener, like tha multi. 2nd bar had a nice first line but a whack second. 3rd bar didn't rhyme too well, wasn't feelin that. 4th bar was iight. 5th bar wasn't that hot. Closer coulda been better.

Jaime - Opener was decent. 2nd bar had good use of multi's but not really a hot bar. 3rd bar was weak. 4th bar couldn't been better. 5th bar didn't make sense cuz he ain't really beggin to win. 6th bar was a good punch, liked it. 7th bar was decent too. 8th bar was a good use of multi's mixed wit a little bit of a punch, so good bar. 9th bar had a tight first line but tha second fell. Closer was real nice. You verse was lookin weak in tha beginnin but that last few bars got you my vote.

Good battle.
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