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Old 04-06-06, 07:05 PM   #12
R. Lingo
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aight.


OK, enough joking.. Looking at ya name you've got the ™ I see
But look son we don't need to trade marks, I can just bruise yo' ass for free
Your time is done bitch, Beat me? Nah, I'll retire you on the shelf
Because SPuL don't hit a winning streak....unless he's battling him fucking self!! *

honestly, that last line is alright cause it's a personal. the trademark line was pretty cool though. nothing else really appealed to me, i guess i just wasn't feelin it duke.






This match gon end up 5-0 me.. wherher or not you like it
N I C KO's in Fletcher's future, even tho I ain't pyschic
You're poor, while my verse is money, always leavin' me rich
So while I'm stealin' the show, you just be stealin' from it

aight, i was feelin these two out of the entire verse. like i said to nick, i just wasn't feelin most of it, but you had these four lines that were pretty hard, i liked the phychic line, although the line about cane and abel, i heard the same wordplay in a clipse song, but it was a decent concept.

v/ spul, because his verse was overall better in my eyes.
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