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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP:
Ahahahah I knew it was gonna be this beat the second I seen the title of your thread..
This was one of the very first beats I ever dropped on back in late 04..
Some quick feed though, lyrics are kinda simple... They get ya message across well, but you could definatly use some improvement on ya rhyme schemes and flow... Especially those parts where you quickly speed up ya flow to fit in extra words.. Thats a big no no.........
Keep it up man.. One of the biggest things you need work on is rhyme schemes and flow.. Everything else seems to be goin well for ya..
Peace.
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