Hook is dope, Buuuuuuttt.. Your delivery of it needs more tone and you sounded a bit shaky on it... You really gotta use a more husky and solid voice on that..

Lyrics are deep.. Inspiring even.. Could use some work on ya rhyme schemes and delivery.. But I feel the message ya gettin accross..

The beat was tight, dont really know about the singing parts.. Sounds a bit too country...

Overall, this is a mad big improvement on the last shit I heard of yours.. Jus a few minor problems that'll fix themselves up through experience.

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