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Old 04-07-06, 12:25 PM   #9
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Voted For: Castro

Castro - Ya verse wasn't too impressive. You had good structure bat that's about it. I didn't see any multi's and not even 1 good punch. The opener was iight but the rest of the verse was weak. Up your vocab. and keep elevatin

EyeDentdy - I dunno bout your verse either. Your punches hit a little better than castro's but they still weren't that great. As far as multi's, you didn't have em either. Your closer was weak, should of ended on a stronger note. It didn't really rhyme. Early and Healthy? But i'm gonna give tha vot to you cuz your verse was just a little bit better.

Booth of ya'll keep elevatin, good battle.

Both of ya'll return tha favor thanx
Me vs. David Lama


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