Voted For: David Lama


David Lama, u don't want no drama/ Cuz I'll put your thoughts in a bag and send it mama/ But first imma read it and see how u thought u could fuck with me/ then Imma put you body under the street/ I'm living a life of crime/ I'm a rapist how i fuck up your rhymes/ then u gonna wanna battle again and i ain't got that time/ I'm done fuckin wit u, u know the rules/ u and me is like pootles and pit bulls. FUCK WIT IT

NO this verse structure made it undable for me to read it learn how to write a verse and then start battling

vs.

F the funny shit. I came to abuse you
I’ll fuck Vince up worse than Stone Cold Steve Austin used to
Ight nice one 8/10
he said he’d be a challenge, I’ll smack this dude
found out V ain’t just for Vendetta. but for whackness too
Good 7/10
skill level?, I’m up a ahead by a bunch of degrees
cuz VD = Illness. only when referring to venereal disease
Lol nice 8/10
dead with the first line, you sure are frail, damn.
I wrapped this deal up quicker than a good car salesman
Eh ight 8/10
I got the punches, only downfolds been the fame
only straight line you ever had was the underscore in ya name
Good closer 8/10

Oveal 39/50

Overal I think david llama won this one

Please rtf honestly:
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