i love ur name bro.....u ever read his writings ??
have a page full of it..some crazy stuff
quality is nice....emotion is good n shit....sumthings off..jus can't tell what..lyrics r tightness..ima havta rewind to catch em all cuz im typing while i listen...[is a good thing]..wow..it's short tho...hmm..maby work on presence a bit..and delevery...
like ur flow...is a bit askward like mine...tyhe choke lines nice..like the rain drop line too
yea..jus polish up ur mic presence a bit bro
hot shit
RTF if u will
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225893