LOL @ me jus using this beat.....is sickness ehh....ehh @ ur accent again..wow..dubs are wayyy off bro...flows their..u need to work on delevery a LOT.....some nice multies here...hook needs LOTA work....2nd dude...nicer..sounds a lil muddy but flows their...ehh..most the time ..till the middle...but u get back on...didnt hear dubs..but not a bad verse overall
work on verse structure and keeping on beat
RTF if u will
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