not my type of beat....
the X-box line is wayy to long....the hater line to...watch putting to many words in a sentence..quality is clean...sumthings off here....the come in the 2nd verse is off..to many words...emotion is their ...lyrics r basic but ok...hooks ok....china line was iight....ur flows a lil chopy wen it's not off..dubs r ok...nicer then a granma..see,don't use basic metas like that..makes u sound dumb...
not a great track bro..keep droppin
RTF if u will
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