your style is really different man....it seems a lil rushed in this song.....i unno, ive heard alot better stuff from you.....maybe at the begning, fade in the beat a lil bit during the end of your movie sample....cuz with you jumping right in it feels a lil suddden....just a personal opinion....its pretty good... but not one of your best.....
the second guy....i dunno sounded good nothing standed out to me....i dunno nothin that special but didnt sound bad
last guy good...only thing to work on is breath control...i hear mad deep breaths in some parts....otherwise, not good, not bad, just another run of the mill track....i know all yall can do better so im not giving full props...but i will say this didnt suck by any means...it just wasnt to the best of your abilities

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