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Old 04-08-06, 04:18 PM   #10
Jay Rose
I don't lose
 
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songs good.....
first verse....yea its good, pretty deep way to stay on subject...
hook- think it needs an effect to diffirenate it from cho's verse
cho - pretty good...you spit to the beat with an intresting flow scheme i like it
3rd vesre.....eh, nothing special but kept up near the level of the first two

pretty good tack....good drop
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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