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Old 04-08-06, 06:44 PM   #3
R. Lingo
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i personally think daubs started out pretty good and ended pretty bad.

il hurt you and your mate, you comin with fake rhymes
kick sharona in his dick and break your teeth at the same time

that was pretty good, but

i got news for this dude so passin messages is my game
so il leave him a bulletin....his skull and his brain

that was kinda eh, in fact, i've seen kemp do the same wordplay, and it was way better, i'm not feeling the concept anymore.

v.

It's true as hell too. . that was trash, it's obvious this dude's pen sucks
So I'ma just drop some shit. . but I'll still offer a hand so you can get up
You flipped once. . went back and decided to repeat the nonsense
I was planning to Key this verse. . but I wanted to KEEP my concepts

those four lines were fire.. and you had some other cool shit too, felt it a lot


v/ mimesis, no doubt.. overpowered in this battle. overall betta verse.
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