1st cat hmmm he has a nice voice, his delivery is decent. Flow was the worst part about his shit, he shoulda went faster to sound better. The lyrics were alright but not my style of writting at all.

Jay hmmm you have a nice voice, if you also went a bit faster it'd sound dope too. The lyrics could be upped a bit more. The delivery was decent for the most part. The ending of your verse with that hook soundin outro was kinda queer man. lol but it's straight

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225805

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