Po I can till your gettin better man. Your pronounciation is gettin there but it still needs a lot more work. You need to get more confortable on the mic man, up your delivery, be more strong man. your flow was pretty much there too and the quality.

2nd cat I just didn't enjoy haha

3rd cat wasn't to bad, he doesn't have the voice to rap but he can flow. the lyrics are good but the delivery could use a bit of work for him.

The beat I also didn't like.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225805

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