I don't like your style one bit......but I'll still critic it fairly.

J I like the way you rap, the way you write is not that cool at all man. I just hate kids that think they tough you know, be yourself man. your lyrics are weak, your delivery is pretty good and strong though. flow is pretty strong and your hook is pretty catchy.

Breezus
I didn't really enjoy your verse. Your flow was pretty decent but you lack delivery and the way you write just aint that great man.

overall this track is weak due to having a overall horrible influence to music.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225805

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